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The Underutilized Preheader / Snippet Text

  February 19th, 2008 by DJ Waldow

One of the many cool aspects of working in the technology industry is learning (and developing) new terms. In case you missed it, a few newbies over the past several months include:

  • Bacn: Bronto highlighted it in this very blog a few months back; there is even an entire site dedicated to Bacn (buy your shirt now)
  • Remail: Tactic #5, or remarketing as some have named it
  • Preheader / Snippet Text: see details below

So…what is the “snippet text?” Stefan Pollard defines it as the “tiny but significant parcel of real estate in your email message.” I especially like his “3-step Extreme Snippet Makeover.”

Lisa Harmon - one of the Voices of Email contributors from the Email Experience Council Blog - evaluates a few messages which utilize the snippet text, or preheader as she calls it. The Pottery Barn Kids example is most in line with what I’d recommend. The key is adding value (i.e, more than “if you’re having trouble viewing…”), while avoiding rehashing what you have in the email body. Comment #1 validates this very point.

I wrote about preheaders back in October of 2007. Since that time, I’ve worked with several clients and you’d be amazed at the results. Click-throughs on the clear call-to-action in the preheader have shot through the roof. It’s amazing that your creative department can spend all that time (and $$) on building “the perfect” email design, and all subscribers want to do is go directly to your site!

Please comment on this blog post with ways you’ve successfully utilized the preheader. The revolution begins now.

DJ Waldow
Account Manager at Bronto

Having Trouble Viewing This Message?

  October 24th, 2007 by DJ Waldow

You’ve probably heard that all of the cool kids: Windows Live (Hotmail), AIM Mail (AOL), Yahoo! Mail (Yahoo!), and Gmail are turning off images by default. To avoid a costly detour by this potential roadblock you could include the old standby “If you are having trouble viewing..” message in your emails.

However, does this messaging really help your bottom line? As a consumer, I bet you don’t even see those words anymore. You’ve subconsciously trained yourself to read right over it at the speed of light. Some phrases - like the ones in my Gmail inbox…

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…have become so overused that eventually, they go overlooked and “unread,” wasting valuable email real estate.

I see the words: problems, trouble, online, web version, click here, viewing, and email being used too often in ineffective ways, such as:

  1. If you are having trouble viewing this email, view it online.
  2. Problems viewing this email? Click here to view a web version.
  3. If you are having trouble viewing this email, click here.
  4. Problems viewing this email? Click Here.

If you think you’re a culprit, instead of restating the obvious, I challenge the you to be like Apple of the late 1990’s and “Think Different.” What would happen if you put a “call-to-action” as your first line in addition to the online version (gasp). Dare to be different…add some spice!

For example…

  1. View our entire collection now or the simply check out the online version
  2. What are you waiting for? View all offers now.
  3. Short on time? Go straight to the source.

As we always stress at Bronto: Test, Test, and then Test again. You may be surprised at the results.

Just beware, after making this change your next problem maybe your subscribers are too busy buying a featured product than reading your message! Not a bad problem to have…

DJ Waldow
Account Manager at Bronto