Loading ...
4 Tenets of a Good Welcome Message, or How to Guarantee a Second Date
November 12th, 2008 by Julie Waite
If you’re a marketer, you’ve probably heard the common dating analogy about asking your prospects to marry you on the first date. While this is most commonly heard in B2B and markets with longer sales cycles, the basic principle holds true for consumer marketing. In the competitive world of email marketing and a tight economy, forging a long-term relationship with your subscribers is more crucial than ever. Think of your welcome message as a first date — are you creating a good first impression that leaves them wanting more, or are you the blind date from hell?
Here are four tenets of a good welcome message, including great and not-so-great examples:
1. Tell Me About Yourself. Let your recipients know what they will receive from you, and how often. Sherman’s Travel does it well, though they could use more links to get me clicking through to their site. Which leads me to…
2. Pique My Interest. Provide links to get people clicking, shopping and engaging with your site immediately. Williams-Sonoma does a great job of this; The Children’s Place does not.
3. Bring Flowers. Everyone likes to feel special, right? Gifts and incentives are a great way to engage your contacts and drive them back to your site. Gap.com offers $15 off your next purchase (plus the option to customize my offers to my interests), other sites offer free shipping, a whitepaper, or a small token gift.
4. Looks Are Important (harsh but true). As with any message, design with both images on and images off in mind. This J.Crew welcome misses the mark completely with images off, not to mention the lack of info on what I will be receiving and when…and the fact that the From Name is a suspicious looking “ContactUs.” With images on (see both part 1 and part 2 – talk about a waste of white space), they do include links to shop, but if I’m a first-time recipient, I’m not likely to enable images so these calls-to-action are lost.
For even more inspiration, check out our BrontoFire episode on Welcome Messages. Feel free to share your own good, bad and ugly first date experiences in the comment section below.
Julie Waite
Account Manager at Bronto
Posted in Best Practices |
Tagged With: Best Practices • BrontoFire • email with images off • email with images on • welcome message
For an example of the OurStage New Artist Welcome message that we send out (That has had extremely successful results) check out:
https://app.bronto.com/public/?q=preview_message&fn=Link&id=1wezyu2pl66epmxb2tez7fw2t0cqx&ssid=5433&t=3
If Julie was to add a fifth item to the list I would suggest “Be A Little Fresh”. Make sure you update your welcome message with the biggest and best content you can. If you’re inviting someone to check out a part of your site, make sure it’s an area that is fresh and current and not talking up something from six months ago. If you’re linking to your blog for example, make sure that it brings them to a current & interesting blog post that will pique their interest. In our case, we want to make sure that our EPKs and iPhone App get a lot of attention from artists just dipping their toes into OurStage.
Brian Whalley
Community Manager
OurStage.com
I agree, Brian. I signed up for OurStage’s newsletters, and you also provided your previous “dating” history by linking to examples of both newsletters - artist and fan - providing some cross promotion, and a reason to sign up to receive more content from OurStage.
Great post Julie!
Kelly Lorenz
Account Manager at Bronto
[...] While Valentine’s Day is till many moons away, the Bronto Blog uses a cute dating analogy to explain best practices for welcome emails. [...]
Agreed, Brian! Welcome messages are not a “set it and forget it” kind of thing - you need to revisit them periodically to make sure that they are still relevant, fresh, and all links still work.
[...] While Valentine’s Day is till many moons away, the Bronto Blog uses a cute dating analogy to explain best practices for welcome emails. [...]
[...] ShoeSteal.com may have some great deals, but I won’t be shopping there any time soon. Spamming is no way to start a relationship. [...]